OracleAtDelphi

@kore21 @maddie131 I will read and critique both of yours.

Blindlai

Hey! i was wondering if you could critique my first chapter from my novel, i saw your critiques and i like them, and since i am just getting started and my native language is not English, i thought it could be helpful
          looking forward to read your stories too!
          thanks

OracleAtDelphi

you still need someone to look?  I've finally logged back onto wattpad after 4 months, and I'd be happy to help.
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AvisInkling

Hello?,:)

OracleAtDelphi

Thanks, thanks.  I'm either around a lot, or not at all (for long stretches of time).
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AvisInkling

@TheYoungBerk laughs* wow. I did not get a notification you responded! I came across Give It Time again. Anyway' welcome back.
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aclockworkangel

How inane, but we both share the name "Ryan," unless it is your pen name, then this statement is even more inane than it had been before.
          
          But since I am here, I will say fantastic job your piece 'give it time,' keep up the good work. I may look at some of your other work as well.