What's going on all you fantastic humans! I just published the first chapter of my story "But A Glimmer In The Void." It's a action adventure novel, based in the medieval times in a world of my own creation. I try to give it a certain depth of realism, so the magic in this world is somewhat different, maybe staunched a bit from the actual magic based books. Anyway, I hope you like it and I'm a new writer so if you have any feedback for me, I would be eternally grateful to you if you just shot me a message. Thanks for your attention, and have yourself an amazing day! Ps: Honest feedback please, because the only way something can truly be built again stronger than the last model, is if it's broken down to the foundations.