I'm in the works of trying to re-write my old book Clockwork Apocalypse. Kana, Sammy, and the story itself is getting a new makeover. Kana is now Angelina and Sammy is now Connor. I already have five chapters flushed out. They have slight sentence structure issues but I wasn't able to make the story more concise and allow it to flow better. I feel like I sped up many of the scenes instead of taking my time to flush out the environment because I chose to start the story somewhere unfamiliar with the landscaping. I might post the unedited chapters to gain feedback.