Jose Emilio Ortiz

heya could u please read http://www.wattpad.com/961417-true-form
          honest commenting and voting... greatly appreciated! 

@Ahnobus Your stories really are very good, the only criticism I have is that they are too short! I want more of your great writing! Hahah. :) And yeah, the reason nobody is giving you negative feedback is because there isn't anything wrong with your stories at all.
          Keep uploading,
          Kugelmonkey. :)

How do you expect me to improve my writing if no one will comment on my stories or poems. I know you guys are picky, but give me a chance. Comment and I will take your advice to heart and improve my writing and my style to please the public as best I can. But I defiantly need your help! Please! :(

JOSE!!!!!!! i love ur stories! as usual.lol

Hiiii
          
          Sorry to bother you but can you please read my story? 
          
          Its called “I Hate You, I Hate You Not, I Love You, I. Wait, What!?!” 
          
          And of course its about vampires, because everyone loves vampire. LOL
          
          Thank-you 
          
          taraniamh xxxxx

I just wanted to say thanks for becoming a fan and reading my novel, Ashes to Embers. I've just got back from sending it to a literary agency so I'm feeling really grateful for all the help and encouragement, even if it doesn't feel like you've done anything  =]
          Good luck with your writing too.
          

"The road to hell is paved with good intentions"
          
          New chapters of Hellspawn: The Arc-Angel are being posted. Don't miss them!

Good sir, it is asi_lay_dying from netlog.
          I read your story and I greatly enjoyed it. I just recently created this account, and would greatly appreciate it if you, along with your many friends and fans would read the short story I just posted. It's untitled, but I believe it failry decent. Thanks :D

For all of my fans who love/like Shadow Knight: Revenge of the Brotherhood or Hellspawn, I apologize for not posting any new chapters lately. I am currently suffering writers' block. I promise that I will post new chapters as soon as I can.
          
          Yours Truly.
          Ahnobus

I LOVE your shadow Knight story :) It's amazing so far
          Please read/feedback on my story. I need help.
          Its called 'I am the Monster.'
          Thanks. Keep Writing
          BTW- Nice Dp