Origin_of_Kelpie

Chapter 10 of Rosianna’s Baer has been posted! I hope you like it. <3

xXDeathIsMyLoverXx

Okay so I know this is so random… and honestly I know it’s a long shot.. however I must ask. Back on the OG account when you were writing the grey sky trilogy, there was a specific chapter (and I’m so not trying to give spoilers for if/when you decide to re-upload it) that Sky had gone to meet the ML’s family (??? It’s been a while so I’m not entirely sure on details anymore) and there was something about a white deer… I think????? Anyways the only reason that’s relevant is because I remember there being a song attached to one of the chapters surrounding that scene and I’m pretty sure it was a lullaby.. I was wondering if you by chance remembered what that song was? I’ve been craving to hear it again but cannot for the life of me remember the song name. Thank you for your time and reading my ramblings

Origin_of_Kelpie

@xXDeathIsMyLoverXx You’re welcome! Sky’s adventures will be rewritten eventually, so hopefully the new version will be much better received. (:
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xXDeathIsMyLoverXx

@Origin_of_Kelpie no worries! Like I said, I think Sleepsong was the one I was thinking of, and I could also have been thinking of some other book I was also reading at the same time that had Sleepsong attached to it that I thought would go well with it Sky and his adventures. Either way , you still helped me remember, so thank you :)
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Origin_of_Kelpie

@xXDeathIsMyLoverXx I don’t think I ever wrote that one into the story. If I did, I didn’t write it for that particular part of Book 1. I was just thinking it could be another cover by Jasmine Thompson, possibly You Are My Sunshine, even though that was sung by Sky to the coyotes in Book 2.
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Origin_of_Kelpie

Chapter 9 of Rosianna’s Baer has been posted! I hope you like it. ;) <3
          
          Yesterday was so insanely busy that I just didn’t have time to finish my editing, but I was able to complete that task before bed on the very first of January 2026. Happy New Year, everyone!

Origin_of_Kelpie

Chapter 7 of Rosianna’s Baer has been posted! I hope you like it. :3 <3
          
          Sorry, I just couldn’t get this chapter posted yesterday. I had a super long day, so I ended up being about a half hour past midnight when I finally finished editing it. Oh well… Not the first time I’ve missed a deadline due to my schedule. 
          
          See you next Wednesday!

Origin_of_Kelpie

Okay, folks… I’ve been doing a lot of thinking and some note-taking, including writing down all of the important characters from a certain series that many of my original readers were looking forward to. Can you guess it?
          
          Yes, it’s The Domination Series!
          
          So, while in my hemming and hawing, I have come to a couple conclusions that might upset the old/original readers of the series. 
          
          Yeah, I’m definitely rewriting the books. The overall plot will remain the same, but I feel like I can do a much better job with the characters, their personal relationships, the events that take place, and the general storyline. 
          
          I’ll be changing the title of the first book ever so slightly, but the rest will remain the same. I feel like this is a necessary change, seeing as I plan to go a little more in-depth with the darkness gnawing within Jaxon as he draws other people closer, which will have a greater impact for the storyline in the second book. 
          
          To be clear, Jaxon’s situation and his environment will change somewhat, but the story will follow a similar path to the original. The romance, mystery, sci-fi, and erotica sub-genres with some fantasy themes will still be present and some will be enhanced in this new version of the series. 
          
          I’m hoping to stay around 35-40 chapters per book, which seems reasonable considering the new version of Anwyll’s story will be around 160 chapters by the time it’s finished in drafts (and I started that scratch-writing process in July 2024). Still, I won’t kick myself if I end up over that desired chapter count. I’ll go with the flow. 
          
          Finally, one thing I often struggle with is writing in third person, even though it is incredibly useful. Should I continue the same 3rd person POV as the original series or would you prefer first person, of which I’m most comfortable with? I’m on the fence, honestly, but you know what I lean towards. 
          
          What do you think?
          
          - Kelpie xo

Origin_of_Kelpie

@eekmahgeek Thank you for sticking around with such patience as a long-time fan! <3 It’s been a rough few years since I decided to start over with many of my works, but I’m making great headway on the first book of The Domination Series. I don’t know if I’ll be able to achieve the same character development of Jaxon as distinctly as in the original series since I am changing the story even more than I thought I would, but the new first book will at least be consistent in the plot and not all over the place like the original one, Dominating the Bully. It does help knowing where to go with the story! (*'▽'*)
            
            And yes, I had a good Thanksgiving! If you celebrate it, I hope you did, too. :)
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eekmahgeek

im so glad youre still around! thank you so much for still working on these books, ive been watching for updates for years!! i frankly dont remember the books much anymore and i havent read much other fic since that time of yours, but i love this series however you decide is best, the original series was actually captivating and i have never been able to find another story thats quite as satisfying in its extent of character development so any way you write will be perfect <3 i really hope you had a good thanksgiving :)
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Origin_of_Kelpie

@DevlishDivine Like I said, I’m on the fence. I don’t know if I should take the easy way out or make another attempt to do third person. I often slip into writing an omniscient POV while working in third person, which isn’t the same, but it does happen. >_>
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