Orlynzo
Hi, if you are reading this please help my little sister. She needs some english people opinion on her first English story .thank you
https://www.wattpad.com/story/294380676?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=PPISOU2&wp_originator=Rn5Bp%2F6GJUoPfUoFzaTDOjpOksiVIKXwj%2F8OHfk1qqKem9I2GuFgw6mGAz4swAAxRy4lFiN8W7qVBWN8R3%2B4HVYspC1tjEsfPNw5Jw%2BaMsWDEBkDgAajVH6zxbFdFsiw