Vinnie_dvn

Hi there! I'm Vinnie!
          I just wanted to spare a moment to tell you about my experience with your DeepVeer or I like my love's name, RanDeep fanfiction 'Unlock My Heart'. 
          Aside from being an incurable Varuniac and a big Sushant Singh Rajput fan, I am bananas about Ranveer AmaSingh. Crazy on the outside, broken on the outside... Just how I am. Your story, has a noble romantic core. Keeping aside the writing style and grammar which needs major help, the story's overall mushy factor was a good read today at 4 am, with the song 'Laal Ishq' on loop. My heart was warmed well. A really good book. All the best. Do continue it soon. 
          Veer Ki Vinnie

Oumaaazz

@Vinnie_dvn Hi there Vinnie! Thank you wholeheartdely for your honesty. Your opportune and pertinent criticism is indisputably  regarded as a motivation and inducement for better writing in the future.
            But, as I have already mentioned before "Unlock my heart" was my very first attempt at writing, the entire process of writing  still remains foreign to me. Major editing will occur soon though.I'm super glad to know that you have enjoyed reading my book despite the numerous mistakes. All the best for you too, I will try to update asap ! 
            Ps: Varun is one of my fav indian actors as well, he's amazing.
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HyeChoi

Me iz excited about  ur new story

Oumaaazz

@HyeChoi Well it is technically a story but uh you know oh well nvm hahaha
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Oumaaazz

@HyeChoi  well it's not going to be a story haha  I'm just going to randomly talk about myself ,  my  clinical depression , my view on depression , how I'm dealing with it , how it's badly affecting me and all that stuff ! but I'm working on a new story and I'm so excited about it , I'm working on the first chap ! I'm also thinking about writing a one-shot !
             Hajar, I perfectly understand you and your struggle now , one simply cannot stop himself and god the stress 
            fkhbarek s7abni I deleted it sa3a bad co lmao ! I will keep it then haha
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