AHigherExistence

I wasn’t sure if you read Athena’s comments so i decided to say this here. 
          
          Thank you so much for the review. I do struggle with “show, not tell” technique, and using other senses apart from sight when writing. I will try to focus on the things you pointed out, although it would have to wait until I finish the first draft. 
          
          If you wish to, you may continue reading my story. I would love to see random comments from you occasionally. 
          
          

OutOfMyImagination

@AHigherExistence, keep going it takes time to learn, good luck <3
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Volshpen

I like your profile picture. 
          
          What story of yours would you recommend first? 
          
          Would you mind checking out mine '9 Days Before.' Story? It'll have a special chapter for today (this Friday, the 13th). 

Volshpen

@Volshpen Horror/Paranormal. So, I guess that leads me to your 'Talk to me' story, haha. That's true, and thank it's the thought that counts c:*
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OutOfMyImagination

@Volshpen Hey, thank you. Depends which genre you enjoy the most, you can just look at the book descriptions, I might look into your book but no promises, thank you for following <3
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rockshower

"Make someone smile everyday, but never forget you're someone too"
          
          What are some things that make you happy? :)

rockshower

@OutOfMyImagination 
            Music is something that bonds everyone haha
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OutOfMyImagination

@rockshower Writing and music always make me happy <3
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