
AHigherExistence
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I wasn’t sure if you read Athena’s comments so i decided to say this here. Thank you so much for the review. I do struggle with “show, not tell” technique, and using other senses apart from sight when writing. I will try to focus on the things you pointed out, although it would have to wait until I finish the first draft. If you wish to, you may continue reading my story. I would love to see random comments from you occasionally.