Hey, you posted on my profile that you needed help, I went through and read the characters and the plot. I love the characters! Absolutely love them! The plot, I sometimes have troubles with the plot too. You're not the only one. Maybe Jeanie or one of the other girl could run away or get really hurt and have some of the girls go after them... I don't know. That's up to you. I hope I helped, you can message Mr anytime for help and I'll be glad to! Have a great day!