smaoineamh
Hi! Thanks for reading and voting on Imalroc! Would love to know what you thought of it!
smaoineamh
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Ahhh the sex scenes...the perils of reading a romance novel. XD
Yeah, I think the world building stays a bit vague or is only hinted at, which I definitely want to address in revisions. I think we'll be getting into it a bit more in the sequel, as both Imalroc and Rerdas have to deal with the political situation in a new way.
Thank you so much for your support!
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OwynBeleforte
@ smaoineamh It's been a real pleasure :)
I love your style of writing and the way you fill the story with emotions, making me feel Redras' discomfort with being cruel to the man he loves. The overall story was good too, no illogical jumps or other common mistakes.
Personally, I'd prefer less sex scenes - but that's just a preference. Also, while it might take away some of the (amazing) density, I'd love some background information on the overall political systems, the neighbouring kingdoms, geography and such... Maybe in a flashback of Redras' childhood.
All in all, I really appreciate all the effort you put in this book and am looking forward to seeing the next one.
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Rethelias
Hi there! I wanted to thank you for all of your votes on Ithyll!!! I do hope you enjoyed
OwynBeleforte
@ Rethelias I did! Even though it's left me confused and without expanations for the bigger part - but then, so does Dark Souls and who doesn't love that.
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FinnyH
Hi! Just dropping by to say thank you for your votes on The Venomancer, @OwynBeleforte! Much appreciated ^^
MarcoBaier
Heya.
I just saw you burned through my Tales of Ruuin stories. Thank you for all the votes. :)
I'll probably finish Gallowwood in the next couple of weeks, but if you are looking for some similar entertainment I'd like to recommend my novel The Harvest Wars (also on Wattpad).
That one is set ten years in the future, but with (some of) the same characters.
Either way. Hope you liked it!
Have a great weekend!
Marco
OwynBeleforte
@ MarcoBaier It's been a pleasure :D and I aready added the other ones to my library, so I'll probably be done with them by tomorrow night.
By the way - I love your style of writing, keep it up.
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RebelDynasty
Hello there, Owyn!
I just wanted to thank you for your votes on Whispers of Nowhere. I really appreciate it, and hope you enjoy the rest.
Have a great day! :)
-Shannon-
matthewbrownstories
Hi, Owyn. Thanks for supporting my story! I hope you enjoyed that scene.
OwynBeleforte
@ matthewbrownstories for sure :) I had it in my library and completely forgot about whatpadd until you updated :)
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Pyrography
Thank you for all the votes for Oakwood Grange!