Hi! Sorry to bother you, I'm not a native English speaker, but I wrote a one-shot aimed at an English audience. It is inspired by the tremendism of Camilo José Cela and the existentialism of Carmen Laforet. It's titled: Elegy for The Orphan’s Testament. It's a psychological, dark fantasy and minstery fiction.
Let me start by saying that I'm not looking for numbers, comments, visuals, or stars, but just people who can tell me if it might be appreciated and if it's well-written.
Some of my Italian friends, who study languages, appreciated it, but I would like the opinion of a native speaker.
Would you like to check it out? I hope this message didn't bother you. ❤️