PANSYTEN

Hello i am PANSYTEN and i am writing a story THE RECARNATED LOVE i would love if you read it and give me suggestions on what i can improve ! This story is not totally fiction sone of it's parts are related to real life !!✌but most of it's parts are fictional !!that's it 
          	BYE BYEEEEEEEE

PANSYTEN

Hello i am PANSYTEN and i am writing a story THE RECARNATED LOVE i would love if you read it and give me suggestions on what i can improve ! This story is not totally fiction sone of it's parts are related to real life !!✌but most of it's parts are fictional !!that's it 
          BYE BYEEEEEEEE