@PANTHERN1 Okay, girl....listen. Your fic was the first Megatron story I have EVER read and while yes the wording and grammar is bad at times, I do admit, as a person who read a lot of good quality and well written stories and also a lot of bad written ones, while also writing myself, your story was VERY very good given that you wrote it when you were young. The storytelling made sense and it was good. The flow of the story, the just right amount of character depth. Everything was there. And except for the grammar errors, I didn't find the story lacking. It's one of the best of there. So you are right, don't pay attention to these comments. Haters will hate. You did great. <333