softdreams_x
Hi, I just noticed that you added Chasing Shadows to your reading list, and I just wanted to say how grateful I am that you even considered reading it ❤
Hope you're staying safe in quarantine!
PAwolfman
Spagbol99
Hey, thank you so much for voting for my book ‘Lay Low’. I hope you get the chance to read it all and let me know what you think. I’ll be honest, I live for the feedback...! ;-)
Spagbol99
Thank you so much for taking the time to reply. I’m glad that you enjoyed then book and felt the emotions of the characters. Also I’m appreciative of your support having read my other books too! Hope you are keeping safe, T
PAwolfman
@Spagbol99 honestly I liked it. I read some of your other works and this is my favorite. I'm American btw, but I could still feel that I understood the setting well. The emotion you give the character and the ending are excellent. I started to get uncomfortable when the main character began unraveling (the drugs for example) because I saw myself a lot in him and the change was a surprise, but you gave it real purpose in the therapist office. Some parts I'm sure could use more fleshing out as writing goes, but I'm not a writer (I'm actually a 21 y/o medical student lol, not exactly a literature expert) so I'm not going to try and pick out any mistakes. Just wanted to say it's a good read. Thanks!
xImprintedx
Hey! Long time no talk. If you want to do some werewolf roleplay let me know. I am in a pack called the Silverlake pack. Hit me up if you want to join.
PAwolfman
@xImprintedx I have just looked over your book for errors and noticed that in chapter one you switch from you talking to him talking but you get things mixed up saying first his than my or I Thought you should know. PA
PAwolfman
Thank you you are quite talented yourself I'll think a bout posting a story soon
xImprintedx
You are a talented writer.. why dont you put your stories on here for people to read? I love your poem!
PAwolfman
PAwolfman
The trees they whisper
The birds they sing
The young creatures they whimper
In earths stormy ring
The storm it does bellow
The clouds they are grey
The people greet hello
On this stormy day
Would you believe I'm in middle school
PAwolfman
All you need
Is one last thing
Write up something
For Robbie to sing
See its in poem form I was bored%uD83D%uDE01