@angelinadenalore Hey, how are you? I'm so sorry I wasn't able to give feedback on your story sooner. I only just realized that I haven't posted my reply yet. I did compose this message last month and just saved it in my notes that's why I thought I sent it as a reply alrrady - please forgive me
Anyway, I've read up to chapter 2 (I think), and here's my honest opinion ..
You're doing great so far!
I've mentioned somewhere before that I choose the stories I read based on:
(1) The structure of the paragraphs or rather how well written each paragraphs is considering indention, spacing, etc.
(2) The coherent thought of how the story is progressing; and
(3) The correct grammar and spelling
You've nailed all my requirements so far. Of course, this is subjective depending on the reader. ☺️ But everything looks to be in place (for me, at least). The story is captivating, interesting and inriguing. The way you pace your revealations are just enough to keep me wondering and thus makes me want to know what's going to happen next. I do hope you post more chapters. Your story has a lot of potential.
I suggest you join one of wattpads many contests to help get your story more views and reads. I'm not really sure how to join ✌️ but they post announcements once every few weeks so just try looking out for them.
I hope I've given you some helpful insights. And I hope to read more from you. Have a great day ahead, dear author ☺️❤️
