PJismine

Stupid bitch keep on hatin Imma keep on doing it spend a day as me, boy you couldn't get the shoes to fit(;

@PJismine uhhm.. you're supposed to have diff POVs? Soooo, iddk what you're issue is...

@aly_mazzei21 honestly, just write a whole new story. Yours is to confusing. Its all over the place.  And you have one chapter in like 5 different POVs. It cant be saved. Its just... bad

Thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Even though you don't like my story, thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.

Even though you don't like my story, thanks for the criticism and the follow(: let me know if there's anyway to make my story better or what it's missing.