hello guys! thank you for all your patience with me! im still struggling through writer’s block but im slowly making progress with my 2nd rewrite. i know you guys would prefer a new chapter, but i have many plotholes that i want to fix and some plot points i need to retcon in order to prepare us for the diego and hot pants arc. since you guys have been really understanding, ill leave you with a few plot points i will be adding/changing with the rewrite. i would also ask that you guys reread once im done. thank you again and here yall go:
- mc and robert will now be twins (please imagine robert as just a male version of yourself looks wise!)
- mc will struggle more with her femininity
- more background on mc’s home life, family, and more on how she got her stand
- more time period accurate dialogue and scenes (+appropriate accents (southern johnny drawl HELLO))
- trauma and reactions that make more sense
- less cringe and more detail
please let me know if you guys have anything you would like to see in this story! also, if you would like to have access to the original palomino before this new rewrite please let me know as well :))
also also i will be making a cute website soon with some extra palomino content for yall to check out if yall are interested
