Poof_Im_A_Floof

Hi, I wrote a story called Going On and entered it in the Wattys2016 and I'd like your opinion. I need all the help I can get and I love feedback. You don't have to read it if you don't want to, but if you do, and if you like it please share it. Thank you! 
          
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/4nAzsyT4dw