PRIVAT3

chapter 26 out now <3 little update at the end about what’s going on w the story! love you all xxxxxxx

TheGrimly7

Hey! I’ve been reading peace and it’s actually inspired me to get back into writing, but I need some tips. Could you give me some? If not that’s okay I was just asking.

TheGrimly7

@PRIVAT3 Thank you so much! That helps a little bit. I’m actually starting to write my own book and it has a lot of heavy topics in it. I want it to show people how mental health can not only affect the person, but others around them. Anyway, thank you. I probably will have more questions in the future lmao.
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PRIVAT3

@TheGrimly7 i hope that makes sense! feel free to ask if you have anymore questions i’d love to help any way i can :) 
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PRIVAT3

@TheGrimly7 don’t be sorry at all that makes sense! i try to focus on what i can use about the environment / what they’re seeing or touching or feeling (basically any sense they have lmao) that could convey what’s going on in their head if that makes sense? like when bucky starts to panic i usually show that through his breathing or his vision going blurry / spotting for example. i read a good tip before that was ‘show don’t tell’ so try to imagine what you would be experiencing if you were that character & then describe what’s happening in that way instead of writing ‘bucky started to panic’ you know? 
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PRIVAT3

hey besties <3 
          
          just wanted to let you guys know i am still working on peace , haven’t completely discarded or forgotten about it - i will definitely be finishing! just been difficult these last few months ❤️ i see all the comments & i really cannot thank you enough for the love xxx 

TheGrimly7

@PRIVAT3 Take all the time you need! I’m really enjoying your book and I have been waiting patiently for the next chapter. Hope things get better for you! ♥️
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PRIVAT3

thank you for 20k on peace, grateful doesn’t even come close ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ thank you so much

Reeader131989

@ PRIVAT3  your story is really good. Hope you will update soon (no pressure, I just really like your writing )
            P.S. English is not my first language. Sorry for the possible mistakes
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