hallo!!! ok,,,i just read ur story,,,heres wat i think,if its going to b a vampire love story,you should write on the tittle *Vampire love story* so that it will attract the vampire lovers.if its going to b a demon love story,,,also add it in the tittle.a lot of times people read a story cos of wat the title says...it can actually b a very good story,,,but u should do it in harper POV and also in calebs point of view.
i think you should rewrite it,,,adding the parts were harper-lee is abused,,,that shud b at the beginning.also add a lot of dialogue between between the characters.
its a good read and i like it,,,but the two main characters should interact more..one thing ive learned about wattpaders is that they like it when the two people in question interract,,,even if its uneccessary.
u shouldn't stop writing.if its something u love doing,,,continue,,,so ya,thats wat i think :D. i hope i was helpful :)
love,
Val x
