@Paaru_sl
You are a good writer and Aarohi is the lead is also a nice idea but I want to show you a loving sister bond no hatred and Akshu should stay with keerti and naksh and arrohi should stay with Goenkas I didn't liked that you made naksh detach from her real sister and her childrens. Idk you hate naira or what but please don't so this.
I love the way you Portrayed aarohi's character, I never liked the way neil was confused about his priorities and didn't trusted aarohi she deserves so much better. I love the bonding between keerti's kids and aarohi please write more stories on aarohi without abhimanyu and neil as male lead. I would love to read your work.
@Paaru_sl i definitely agree they were the only couple I liked in this gen even if they had done mistakes atleast they accept and try to do better but the surroundings were not good the deserved so much better. Others interference was the main cause I feel. I don't follow now as can't connect with the character like they are making other characters evil to give limelite to lead. Gen 1st was the best. Specifically I dislike devorce track like get separated and again back like nothing happen. I am wishing to read your other stories. Do recommend if you know book on aarohi as fml.
@eva_aa_ Thankyou so much for supporting,I will surely write more,I have planned some things.Keep supporting♥️
@eva_aa_ Hi,Before the first leap,I didn't like him much,I wanted a new lead for Aarohi,then their love and mrg happened,Yeah Neil had messed up,But he put so much efforts too,the prblm was Everyone's presumptuous behavior with Aarohi,They never gave a chance to explain,Whenever they had a chance they would bombarded her with questions,If he truly prioritized herself,She would have given him more,She deserved so much,they could have been the best couple of the gen,And even Now In my pov they are a better couple than the lead couple.
Hii, can't open the new chapter.
Hii dear writer your book is awesome the way you are portraying aarohi her insecurities ambitious nature and loved your writing skills
@harshadxworld Thankyou so much for your constant support and appreciative words.This means a lot! Will post soon.
Hey I liked ur book n writing skills of the plot in different way.. looking forward to read the next chapters also the way u portrayed arohi is nice n how she dealt, faced the circumstances n overcome her insecurities(should mention in detail if u have an idea)
The way in serial the whitewashed the mahaan akshu n her abhimanyu the great, they just want to prove ri8 themselves n the whole wrong goes to arohi their to expose accusations interference,..etc they didn't show the trust in their relationship n they pointed aru as she doesn't fit for any kind of relationship n trust... After reading urs plot i liked it to see further updates☺️ to read...
@krishyaana_kutty Thankyou for your kind messages,Its mean a lot to me♥️ I hated the way they portrayed aarohi as a person who doesn't fit for any relationship,Literally those who failed in their relationship and those who fell in love during a holiday trip, put down the love of Aarohi for Neil,infact they had maintained their relationship for a year,at last she was the one who stayed true to him till last. Also I will describe her feelings and insecurities in a detailed way!
Sorry for the inconvenience!
@paianjalir It was uploaded by mistake,and I deleted it!
I like u story update more can u show the facts which that serial didn't show as they always show akshara as mahan and abhimanyu as loving pair bull shit.can u pls show facts and show aarohi as independent and strong show the Manish goneka always say u re blood is dirty.
@Fabshetty0451 Yeah sure I have planned many inspiring things for Aarohi.She will be the ambitious girl as always.As For Akshu I didn't plan much.Thankyou for your suggestions!Please do Support.
