PacificBlue764

Now can you generally tell me what can I improve the story?
          	Should I increase the word limit? 
          	Like about 3000 too...
          	Is there problem in the flow of the story, are you feeling disconnected somethings or not ... 
          	Should I elaborate more ...
          	Or should I increase no . Scenes ,
          	How is the story line , and am I able to do justice with it or not?
          	Please  answer genuinely...

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tulipxtixy_

@PacificBlue764  welcome dear kindly share the link with your friends for engagement 
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tulipxtixy_

Hey your reel is done kindly complete the payment 

PacificBlue764

I really loved rag rang . 
            At night i really that book , it was great 
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PacificBlue764

@tulipxtixy_ done  
            Yt channel also subscribe,
            
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PacificBlue764

Now can you generally tell me what can I improve the story?
          Should I increase the word limit? 
          Like about 3000 too...
          Is there problem in the flow of the story, are you feeling disconnected somethings or not ... 
          Should I elaborate more ...
          Or should I increase no . Scenes ,
          How is the story line , and am I able to do justice with it or not?
          Please  answer genuinely...

tulipxtixy_

We post the reel on our yt channel 

PacificBlue764

@tulipxtixy_ i m also having yt .
            Search bluepacific author 
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