Nandriullavan
Hiiiii mam! Been reading the book since the start. It's awesome. Fantastic storytelling. The character intros were just . The way u captured the emotions present in a situation through povs were awesome. I'm excited for the next coming parts. Can I just give a quick suggestion? Pls feel free to ignore the suggestion if u feel otherwise coz I can understand u have been dedicated to creating this world. I just have to say the recent plot points have been kind of underdeveloped. Like parth and Sana happened too quick. I was hoping for some emotional or sad kind of stuff and them supporting each other and their connection grows. (But kudos to how u wrote the RAIN MIXED WITH MY HAPPY TEARS, the line was golden). So yea I hope u could develop the plot more. Character development of parth has been a bit rushed too ig. Character development of Sana and dhruv were just top notch awesome mam. And thats it ig it's been a pleasure reading. Happy writing!!!
Also, I have a twin sister and we r preparing for our medical exams too . So I can connect a lot wid it.
ginxley
@Padmavati_12 Thank you mam. I would love to help him w managing, but I am afraid if it would spoil his determination. I mean, everyone can't have the same concentration levels and study plans. But, as you said, self controlling is crucial. He stays glued to his tab if he takes it for some purpose. So, I supported him with that dec. Well, it's upto him mam. If he wants to give the other method a chance for the upcoming week, I'll make sure he FOLLOWS his timetable and completes whatevs he plans to study. If he becomes bratty and uses his tab, breaking the streak for atleast one day, I'll be the first one to make sure, she logs out from EVERYTHING, and gets back to studying. Thanks for ur valuable advice mam. It even helped me to know that I MUST START CONTROLLING MY EMOTIONS AND TEMPTATIONS and not run away from those, but battle against em while they are right in front of me.
Nandriullavan
@Padmavati_12 yes mam definitely. Thank you so much for the advice. I am just planning on listening to songs for breaks. Thank you so much for the amazing stories u r giving us and indirectly they serve as a form of a haven. From the analysis that we have done, we found out that neet is an exam which tests ur concentration and ability to retain information. (Hope we r right here mam). So, as u said, we shud work more on moving away from temptations and focus on ourselves and we will work towards it. Thank you for those golden words mam. And I got @ginxley wid me to help me out. Why fear when ur twin is here. Bye mam. Hope ur internship goes well too. All the best for ur future plans mam. Hoping to connect more with the stories I will hear.
Padmavati_12
@ginxley Congratulations on your score. I am proud of you! You can help your twin with managing. Siblings are the best gift one could ever get. Stay with each other through the ups and downs.