PagesbyShri

New chapter updated! ✨
          	This one is personal.
          	Family. Fear. Fire.
          	Don’t miss it.
          	I just published "Chapter 10: Arera Colony Market Chaos " of my story "Between Ink & Evidence ". https://www.wattpad.com/1610468751?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PagesbyShri

SejalSahu7

Hey author !
          It's my first time visiting your profile and I'm reading yout "between ink' book I found its good bcz of criminal× justice trope and as u said u've good thing kept for your book but I m currently reading it upto 7th chapter and as per my understanding I'm suggesting that u should write full sentences about" facts and findings" between two person conversation and you've started to write interaction between FL & ML but there not spark and full conversation between them it's so fast paced that it's not making sense about the crime u're trying to explain.... Maybe u find my words rude or harsh but my intention is only to help u convey your hard work in proper way which will help readers to engage with your story and it's also good thing that you're writing it in bhopal city so I can connect with it happily..... I hope u read this msg and understand my request and don't feel offended.

SejalSahu7

@SejalSahu7  I really am finding your work good and that's why I just want you to correct what's I feel is wrong in your writing pattern and I'm reading it further to know about the whole story so feel don't feel disheartened and I'm not pointing your mistakes but just want to help u by reading it and letting my thoughts about the story and sorry for my comments on chapter but there some issue with comment box it's just typing about 30-40 words so it's not convey my true intenstion sorry if u feel upset with my words.
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PagesbyShri

@SejalSahu7 Thanks a lot again and keep supporting me till the end. I would really appreciate if we connect on insta of u use for better communication.
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SejalSahu7

@PagesbyShri yup for sure!
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authorshree_

Hi there!
          
          I just wanted to recommend this book to you.
          If this sounds like your kind of story, I’d absolutely love for you to give it a try.
          
          ~ Beyond the Spotlight
          
          ~ Tropes:
          
          • Age Gap (31–26)
          • Actor x Lawyer
          • Celebrity x Fan Girl
          • Enemies to Lovers
          • Fake Dating
          • Forced Proximity
          • Opposites Attract
          • Grumpy x Sunshine
          • Slow-Burn Romance
          • Soft Romance
          • Jealousy & Possessiveness
          
          Here’s the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392146140?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=chahatwrts
          
          Thank you!