PagesbyShri

New chapter updated! ✨
          	This one is personal.
          	Family. Fear. Fire.
          	Don’t miss it.
          	I just published "Chapter 10: Arera Colony Market Chaos " of my story "Between Ink & Evidence ". https://www.wattpad.com/1610468751?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=PagesbyShri

SejalSahu7

Hey author !
          It's my first time visiting your profile and I'm reading yout "between ink' book I found its good bcz of criminal× justice trope and as u said u've good thing kept for your book but I m currently reading it upto 7th chapter and as per my understanding I'm suggesting that u should write full sentences about" facts and findings" between two person conversation and you've started to write interaction between FL & ML but there not spark and full conversation between them it's so fast paced that it's not making sense about the crime u're trying to explain.... Maybe u find my words rude or harsh but my intention is only to help u convey your hard work in proper way which will help readers to engage with your story and it's also good thing that you're writing it in bhopal city so I can connect with it happily..... I hope u read this msg and understand my request and don't feel offended.

SejalSahu7

@SejalSahu7  I really am finding your work good and that's why I just want you to correct what's I feel is wrong in your writing pattern and I'm reading it further to know about the whole story so feel don't feel disheartened and I'm not pointing your mistakes but just want to help u by reading it and letting my thoughts about the story and sorry for my comments on chapter but there some issue with comment box it's just typing about 30-40 words so it's not convey my true intenstion sorry if u feel upset with my words.
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PagesbyShri

@SejalSahu7  Thanks for the suggestions sejal.. I really appreciate that you really invested so much time to read the story and I will definitely keep things in mind. But I would appreciate if you read further chps and still feel the same thing. And since you have left comment on almost all the chps I am grateful for that but you have not once said something good.. you have only pointed out my mistakes. This is the first time I have come up with original work and being a human I also make mistakes but you only focusing on mistakes is really disheartening. Hope you find something good as well in the story and I would try to make it better.
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chappalkhaoge

Hi there!
          
          I just wanted to recommend this book to you.
          If this sounds like your kind of story, I’d absolutely love for you to give it a try.
          
          ~ Beyond the Spotlight
          
          ~ Tropes:
          
          • Age Gap (31–26)
          • Actor x Lawyer
          • Celebrity x Fan Girl
          • Enemies to Lovers
          • Fake Dating
          • Forced Proximity
          • Opposites Attract
          • Grumpy x Sunshine
          • Slow-Burn Romance
          • Soft Romance
          • Jealousy & Possessiveness
          
          Here’s the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392146140?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=chahatwrts
          
          Thank you!