Hey Pips I'm still alive and just unpunished two of my stories (Little kitten & Perfect Chemistry) since no one is reading and giving attention to it, and I just re-read it myself and laugh since I have so much mistakes on both of them, Maybe if I'm finish writing "First Love" I'll take a second look at both of the stories and fix it.
Keep in mind I'm just a lazy potato and I'm not smart so I hope you won't get irritated by the flaws in my stories. :)