Paigeisalenton

@Scarlet18  I know it's a lot of effort but you're so great at writing could you check one of my books and offer advice? 

Scarlet18

@OXjustmeXO okay I did... Hmm, I think they're great but maybe if you make it longer it would catch people's eyes. Though there's some people that likes short stories, but maybe you could do both, like short story for the first then longer with the next chapter. I've never given advice before lol :T I hope this kind of help...