@OXjustmeXO okay I did... Hmm, I think they're great but maybe if you make it longer it would catch people's eyes. Though there's some people that likes short stories, but maybe you could do both, like short story for the first then longer with the next chapter. I've never given advice before lol :T I hope this kind of help...
I'm writing again. I'm so sorry, I'm a terrible writer just been really busy with my GCSE's, I'm writing another part to a normal day, if you want me to update a specific story please do tell me