@angryxsian I'm sorry, I'm guessing you didn't read my thread. I'm super busy right and I have a lot of other chapters to edit, full time. I don't think I can edit yours.
Hello! I have recently started a story called Bubbles, and I was wondering if you would check it out and possibly leave some feedback? Here is the link if you are interested:
http://www.wattpad.com/story/17182992-bubbles
(I read your short story and I loved the language and emotion you put into it! Please keep writing. Maybe you could offer me advice on the writing in my own story, if you choose to. Thank you!)