@XFactorForWriters Sorry! I don't think I have time to participate in this contest anymore :( So, I withdraw. Thank you for running this contest, though. It was fun.
@XFactorForWriters Sorry! I don't think I have time to participate in this contest anymore :( So, I withdraw. Thank you for running this contest, though. It was fun.
Ohhh, I'm not trying to get you to change anything in your story. I was just naming my opinion. I dont think you have to try and fix anything just maybe as the story progresses add more emotion. Thats all:)