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Today’s my birthday everyone! Happy birthday to me!
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Today’s my birthday everyone! Happy birthday to me!
CiaraMorningstar
Hey. Can we talk?
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@CiaraMorningstar part 2: Kari narrows her eyes at him, completely skeptical. "Why?" she asks directly. "Why would you want to take me to lunch?" Vox chuckles, placing a hand over his chest in a faux-innocent gesture. "Hey, no need to be so defensive! It’s just, you seem pretty new to Hell. As one of the top overlords here, I just want to make sure you feel welcomed." Kari holds back a scoff. *Yeah, right*, she thinks to herself. She knows exactly who he is. She knows Vox aware that she is staying at the Hazbin Hotel, and she knows that he and the rest of the Vees are actively out to get her and the hotel crew. Accepting an offer from him is dangerous. If I say no, he might get suspicious or pushy, Kari thinks, her mind racing. If I go, I can keep an eye on him—just as long as I don't give anything away. Kari relaxes her posture, forcing a soft, gentle smile onto her face. "Well... alright then," Kari says calmly, accepting the offer. "Lunch sounds nice." Vox’s smile turns wide and triumphant. "Excellent choice! Right this way, my treat."
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@CiaraMorningstar here’s part 1: Kari is walking down the bustling streets of Hell, trying to get her bearings. As she turns a corner near a towering V-Tower electronics store, she suddenly collides with someone tall. "Whoa, watch it—" Kari starts to say, stumbling back. She looks up and her eyes widen. Standing right in front of her is Vox, adjusting the lapels of his suit. He looks down at her, his TV screen lighting up with a smooth, charismatic smile. "Well, well, well," Vox says, his voice carrying a slight electronic hum. "My apologies, heart stopper. Didn't see you standing there." Kari takes a small step back, her guard instantly going up. "It's fine..." she says cautiously. Vox looks her up and down, his screen flickering with interest. "You look a little lost. Say, are you hungry? I actually know the perfect place around here to grab some lunch."
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CiaraMorningstar
I want my second chapter to start out with Kari asleep. Then she begins to dream. In her dream, she sees Angel dancing on stage. At first it looks like he is happy. But then the dream turns dark. The dream is suppose to give Kari a glimpse into the abuse Angel endures from Valentino.
Then Angel stops dancing and the whole room turns dark and the lights fade and people disappear. Then Kari sees Angel being pulled into the dark by red smoked chains.
Kari tries to help Angel by pulling him back, but the chains keep getting tighter and tighter as more appear all around his body and they keep on pulling him until they are too strong and Kari can't hold on any longer.
Kari feels Angel slipping out of her grip and just like that, Angel is pulled into the darkness and disappears.
Kari cries out, "ANGEL!"
And then she wakes up.
Can you write that for me?
PandaQueen2347
@CiaraMorningstar you’re welcome:) Also, quick question when you do Bad Guys 2 will you give a New sketch look updated for Vixx since she’ll be 16 in that story also a character image of who her love interest will look like??
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@CiaraMorningstar part 3: She pulls with all her strength, but the red chains keep getting tighter and tighter around Angel. "It hurts—Kari, it's too strong!" Angel chokes out, gasping for air as the smoke burns against him. More smoke chains appear all around his body, wrapping tightly around his chest and extra arms. They keep on pulling him back into the dark with immense force. "No, no, no! I'm not letting him take you!" Kari screams, her arms shaking violently as she scrambles to hold on tight. "Just hold on to me!" "I'm sorry..." Angel whispers, tears falling down his face. "I can't..." The chains pull with a force that is far too strong, and Kari can't hold on any longer. Kari feels Angel slipping out of her grip as her fingers slide off his hands. "Angel, no! Hold on!" Kari desperately pleads, scrambling forward on her knees to grab him again. Just like that, the red smoke chains yank Angel straight into the darkness where he completely disappears. Kari reaches her hands out into the empty dark and cries out, "ANGEL!" She then gasps and bolts upright in her bed, instantly waking up from the nightmare. What do you think?
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Happy Father’s Day everyone!
meckenziejones
Thanks for voting of my drawings and I just wish someone would help me with my story.I tried to tell him that but nobody takes me seriously
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@Ciara_Morningstar here’s part 3 sorry it took so long. Been very busy. Also I was sick for a bit. Vincent and Ru-na were able to carry it down 2 flights of stairs before they faced more problems Ru-na: “Oh Vincent.” Vincent: “What?!” Ru-na: “All of the weight is on this end.” Vincent: “it is not!” Ru-na: “It is too!” She retorted back. “I want to trade places with you!” Vincent sighed and gave into her request. Vincent: “ugh… ok. Put it down.” They carefully put the box TV said on the steps of the stairs, and they both quickly shuffle past each other until they were on the opposite ends. Vincent: “Okay, ready?” Ru-na: “Ready!” Vincent: “1… 2… 3!” They both picked it up and then Ru-na complained again Ru-na:” Oh! Oh, Vincent.” Vincent: “What!?” Ru-na: “All the weight is on this end now!”
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@Ciara_Morningstar here’s part 2. Sorry it’s taking so long, I’m not feeling well: Vincent crouches and grabs one end of the TV Ru-na sighs but grabs the other end. Vincent: “Ready? On three.” Ru-na: “Idon’t think this is—“ Vincent: “Okay! One… two… three!” They lift. The TV jerks upward, nearly pulling them off balance Ru-na: “Vincent!” Vincent: “I’ve got it!” They shuffle toward the stairs. Ru-na: “Slowly!” They reach the first step. Vincent lowers his end slightly. The TV box tilts forward. Ru-na: “Don’t tilt it!” Vincent: “I’m not tilting it!”
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@Ciara_Morningstar here’s part one of the scene you wanted. (I wasn’t able to add descriptive details before work, but I hope you like the first part): Setting: The top floor inside Vincent’s penthouse. A huge wooden-boxed television sits in the living room. Vincent dusts off his hands confidently. Vincent: “There we go. Brand new television.” Ru-na eyes the massive TV. Ru-na: “It’s… enormous.” Vincent: “Naturally. If I’m going to watch something, I prefer it large and impressive.” Ru-na: “As impressive as the new TV is, Vincent. Why did you pay the movers to only bring the new TV up while we are carrying the old TV down stairs?” She points to the other, slightly smaller Box TV sitting out in the hallway outside of the penthouse. Vincent: “Well… we need to also be efficient ourselves, Ru-na. Not to disrespect the hard-labor workers, but we can’t always rely on other people to do our own hard work, and The movers worked up a sweat to bring this big thing up here so I thought they deserv-.” Ru-na crosses her arms and gave him a deadpan look. Ru-na: “You forgot to pay them to carry the old TV down the building, Did you?” Vincent slumped and sighed in defeat Vincent “Ugh…… Yes. But it shouldn’t be too hard Ru-na, it’s only 10 flights of stairs! If we work together, we’ll get it done in no time.”
PandaQueen2347
OK it’ll take a bit. I’m going to be working tonight