Momo Jeanette Panda

I need some feedback guys and girls

Posted chapter 1 to my new book. I think its gonna be great!
          
          Any ideas? Post them below or pm me!!

Okay so I'm putting Rejected by the alpha on hold.
          
          I've created a new book!!!!!
          
          Its a mystery called " Lost & never Found "
          
          No chapters yet just a description. And a informative page. 
          
          Thank you all remember to share my profile I love you all!

Hello my followers. I'm about to open up the real me. And the real me is a 13 year old girl. I am in love with the idea of a soulmate. And I love werewolves. I love pandas and I love my brother! @Pancakes-Succulents
          
          He's gay and loves anime. Go check him out.
          
          Anyway..... please forgive me on me kinda lying.
          
          
          
          Also I don't like anime as much as my followers may think........
          
          
          I love you all especially the ones who stay by my side with my decision on this.