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I updated the first chapter of Pro Hero added dialogue to help fill plot holes
          	
          	I've been putting this off for a long time because I wasn't sure how to fix the issues in the first chapter but I'm pretty sure I fixed most of them
          	
          	I spent 2 hours rereading my first chapter and adding dialogue and I'm pretty happy with the updates let me know if there's any issues or plot holes that need to be fixed

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I updated the first chapter of Pro Hero added dialogue to help fill plot holes
          
          I've been putting this off for a long time because I wasn't sure how to fix the issues in the first chapter but I'm pretty sure I fixed most of them
          
          I spent 2 hours rereading my first chapter and adding dialogue and I'm pretty happy with the updates let me know if there's any issues or plot holes that need to be fixed

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I'm sorry for not uploading my friend went off to college so I was spending the week playing games with him enjoying the time we had left
          
          Also the past week I've been demotivated from working on it sorry again hopefully next week will be better

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@CourtneyxLovelace  sorry I haven't uploaded I just saw this message. Having a really hard time finding inspiration work on it. Having a lot of self-doubt. I have been working on the story it is just not final draft so I don't want to publish. i have around 80 to 90 pages of my book written out
          
          You were the only one to read my work so it was kind of discouraging the fact that only one person read it or at least commented
          
          I did truly like your input and love the fact you commented on my work and took the time to read it
          
          I am continuing to write the story I just don't have the drive to continue uploading but that may change idk
          
          I got discouraged like I said before when no one seemed to read it 
          
          i want to keep working it is just hard to know if i am on the right track. or if i am wasting time. so it is hard to work on the story like i did when i was first writhing
          
          idk what to do i fell lost the past few months