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I've noticed I struggle with finding a balance with description and Arctura's thoughts. If I put too much of her thoughts in, then there is barely any description, but if I put too much description, then we don't really know what she's thinking. It takes forever for me to find a good balance, and even then, I still don't know if it's great.
          
          Finding readers on Wattpad is very... hard, to say the least. I wish it was easier for people to find my ff, but I suppose people don't want to read unfinished works. I guess I could just really use some opinions on my writing. 
          
          Hopefully I will get some feedback soon!

I was working on a second chapter but I decided to just add it to my first chapter and overall just have longer chapters. I will probably continue adding to chapter one. I have a lot of stuff outlines and I had an idea of where I want chapters to start and end, and chapter one is nowhere near where I want it to be. I do want to keep updating it on here though because as long as I have very few readers, I doubt anyone will make a fuss about it. 
          
          Well, heres to hoping the longer chapter one will excite more people into reading this book and getting some feedback! Enjoy! I tried to add some actual time travel into it haha.

Hello all of my fans! (31 followers) I am making slow progress but I am getting close to finishing chapter one. I just want to get something done and maybe get readers for some feedback. Hopefully I can get this done before the end of the night. I like to write out the first chapter in the most bare and boring sentences, but it helps me with the general layout of the chapter so I'm not just making up random things that hold no significance. Usually I try to go back and then make it more descriptive and everything. I don't have anyone reading over my words so I am less prone to finding spelling/grammar mistakes. Anyway, thanks for reading this my future followers of this book (hopefully..)!