PangoroGrunt
Hello everyone, this is PangoroGrunt. I'm messaging you all to ask how you feel about the 2nd chapter of Dungeon Crawler RWBY? I know I included a Petrosapien as a Game Guide, and I can't help but wonder if maybe that was the wrong call and I should have used Mordecai (who was Carl's Game Guide) instead. I wanted to make it more original and separate from the books, so it's not a complete copy and paste thing. But at the same time, I'm having doubts on if I should make it more like the books.
So, basically, the Borant Corporation was supposed to go to Earth, but instead, they stop at Remnant because "hey, this world's already looking broken and chaotic, so let's go ahead and start collecting this planet's elements instead.". I can easily make the change, but I really like what I have for Xandrite. Especially since he's actually a Weapon's Master, which will be explained further in the third chapter.
But let me know what you all think.
TadStranger
@PangoroGrunt to be honest, I like the more original idea, I know my story has a lot of elements from the source material, so as a word of the wise, use more creative look as it allows you to flesh out you original character more.
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ZackFair1989
@ PangoroGrunt I didn't heard from Dungen Crawler till now so al i can say right now lets Take this road and see where it goes
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