@Panther_ism
Thank you so much guys for 12k.
I wrote Burning Desire just for fun and never imagined it would receive so many views.
Thank you to everyone who patiently read my story, even though it was a bit boring at the beginning, hehe. Your support truly means a lot to me.
I’ll be ending this story soon and will work on my other book (Vows of blood) with even more effort and improvement.
I don’t know if I should say this, but I really want Xaden to become the ultimate yearning final boss by the end.
Right now, he’s cruel to her—not physically, but mentally—and it hurts to read. The way he tests her, pushes her, breaks her walls without mercy… it’s painful. But that’s exactly why, when he finally realizes he loves her, I want it to destroy him.
I want the regret.
I want the slow realization.
I want him to understand what he almost lost.
Rose deserves to be loved fiercely after everything she’s survived. And if Xaden does love her in the end, I want him to earn it—through yearning, guilt, and absolute emotional ruin.
This dynamic is intense, painful, and addictive. I’m trusting you with it
Every character in this story feels so intentional, and that’s what makes it impossible to put down.
Xaden is terrifying in the quietest way. His cruelty isn’t physical—it’s psychological, calculated, and cold, which somehow makes it worse. And yet, I can already see the potential for him to become the ultimate yearning final boss when he finally realizes what Rose means to him. If that moment comes, I want it to break him completely—with regret, guilt, and longing.
Rose… she’s powerful in a way that comes from survival, not privilege. Her cruel past shows in every decision she makes, and I love that she isn’t written as soft or naïve. She’s strong, guarded, and real—and she deserves a love that doesn’t diminish her.
And Win—oh, Win. Loving her silently, choosing her happiness over his own, standing by without asking for anything in return. His presence hurts in the most beautiful way. He’s the kind of character that makes your chest ache.
The dynamics between all three are painful, complex, and incredibly well-written. This isn’t just a story—it’s emotional damage, and I mean that as the highest compliment. Please keep going
@Rajnandanee-02 Of course, you don’t have to write everything the way I imagine it—that’s just my personal opinion as a reader. You’re the author, and you understand these characters far better than anyone else. I truly trust your vision and your storytelling. Whatever direction you choose, I know you’ll handle it beautifully. I’m just here to read, feel everything, and support your work. Keep writing the way you want to
Just wanted to ask about Vows of Blood—it’s been around 15 days since the last update, so I thought I’d check in.
No pressure at all, I know writing takes time. I just wanted to say I’m really looking forward to the next update whenever you’re ready. The story has my full attention, and I’m excited to see where it goes next.
@Rajnandanee-02 That’s completely okay, please don’t worry at all Your exams are important, and I’m really proud of you for focusing on them. Thank you for being so kind and for telling me—I truly don’t mind waiting. I’ll be right here, happily waiting and cheering for you while you do your best. Knowing you’ll start writing again from 22 December honestly makes me excited. And hearing that you love me? That genuinely made my day. It means more to me than you know. I love your work, I love your stories, and I truly appreciate you as a writer. All the best for your exams—you’ve got this. Take care, and I’ll be waiting whenever you’re ready ✨
@Rajnandanee-02 I’m really sorry for making you wait. My exams are going on right now, so I’ve decided to start writing again from 22nd December. Thank you so much for reading my work, waiting so patiently, and being so kind to me. I love youuuu
I love Zevran so muuchhh.... Like I can't even explain how deeply I love him. He is so fucking hot --- the aura he holds, the way he walks, the way he talks, the way he does every single thing makes me go insane. He is like a drugs to me that I am obsessed with. It's not just his looks--its his confidence, and the way he knows exactly who he is. He doesn't try to impress that what makes him more attractive.
His presence itself makes me giggling and rolling on my bed.
I've read a lot of books, but no MMC has ever attracted me like him. And oh God--he didn't just attract me, he made me lose my mind. The way he treats Dove, the way he notices every little detail about her. It's just hit different. I want to be in her place so badly. The way he understands Dove without her even explain herself says everything about him. Every girl in this world is dying to have a man like him.
The story is so so so damn ass good ngl, it's been decades since a new chapter update , please WRITE!!. I'm really so curious what's gonna happen not only for Zevran and Dove but also for other characters ,Marcus ,Molly, Marina, Yoora all of them. It's so addicting, I literally can't stop reading it again and again. Well you can say this story got me smiling out of nowhere wherever I think of it. It's the perfect combination of intensity and love. It's like my comfort story now. And Zevran.. That man is something, he got me rolling on the bed giggling. I love this story of yours so much.
I love your story so much.. Like i am addicted to your story. Please update more chapters, I am dying to know if the dove will fall for zevran or not and also will there be any smut or not.
I wanted to ask about the second story you’re writing—Vows of Blood.
I noticed there isn’t any description on the front yet, and there are no character details either, so I was really curious about what kind of story it’s going to be. The title itself sounds intense and intriguing, which honestly makes me want to know more.
Whenever you feel comfortable, I’d love to read a short description or learn a little about the characters and the world. I’m genuinely interested and excited to see where this story is headed.
Looking forward to it.
Aren't you going to update the burning desire
@Rajnandanee-02 I don’t know why, but Marina and Yerin truly stayed with me. Yerin—because she chose to save Dove, even when it meant going against her own younger brother. That kind of loyalty and courage hits deep. It’s not loud or flashy, but it’s powerful in the quietest way. And Marina… when Dove first entered this world, Marina was that cheerful, lovey-dovey presence who stayed by her side. If I were in Dove’s place, I honestly would have considered Marina my best friend. She felt like home in a world that wasn’t kind. Her death broke my heart. Truly. Thank you for writing characters who feel this real—who leave a mark even after they’re gone. That kind of storytelling stays with a reader long after the chapter ends.
@Rajnandanee-02 Omg, I loved how you described Zevran and obviously everyone will like him. But besides him and Dove, who is your favorite side character? I know I’m asking a lot, but I really want to know what my readers think, hehe. And about the editing ,you’re right. I need to edit it once, and I’m sure I can make this story even more beautiful. There are some mistakes too, but I promise that as soon as I get the time, I’ll fix everything. And don’t worry, I’m not giving up on this story. I still have so much planned ,I’m just waiting for more readers, comments, and votes.
@Rajnandanee-02 Zevran Freaking Thorne. He is the kind of man every woman wants, needs, and craves—the kind of villain who would burn the world down just to keep his woman locked safely in his arms forever. That obsessive, dark devotion? Absolutely intoxicating. I’m genuinely in love with how you’ve written him. The intensity, the emotions, the way he owns every scene he walks into—it’s rare, powerful, and unforgettable. Stories like Burning Desire don’t come often, and your imagination deserves nothing but praise. I truly beg you—please don’t abandon this masterpiece halfway, like so many brilliant stories sadly are. This world, these characters, him—they deserve to be completed. And honestly, the only tiny thing I noticed (and this is said with so much respect) is that a few sentences here and there could shine even brighter with light editing. Nothing major at all—just small tweaks that you could easily fix if you ever choose to. Your storytelling is already strong; a little polishing would make it unstoppable. Thank you for giving us Zevran Thorne. Please keep writing. Please keep burning us with this desire.