Nullanon
Your story certainly has potential. A little slow for a first chapter, even if it’s just a prologue. Not bad though. If you’d like, I urge you to read my ongoing early modern fantasy story if you ever have the time. Help each other out by mentioning suggestions or comments on grammatical errors. And a follow would be nice too as I have followed you since you appear to have some ambition planned for your story. I await on any news or updates.