MoonLightWolf333
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@lostinthecoulds no but I could make one real quick cuz every one asks me if I have it
Hey, Shieldbreaker here, about your Crimson Reaper Series. First of all, I like the story.
It does seem a little fast paced to me, and the formatting could use some improvement. Space out the dialogue from the rest of the story. Makes it look more professional. Other than that and some grammer errors, it's great.
@JosephDeShields thanks I will try to get that fixed and since your here why not check out my ocs trust me I don't make them too op just a little
Hey its me MacLaine from school
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