I just wanted to tell you two things, since you said we’re both friends. First, I genuinely feel like Jay’s character is a little unbalanced. He’s a man who seems to prioritize only one person in his life, so can we try to balance his character a little more? I think it would make him feel more realistic and well-rounded.
And Mia… she’s our cute little baby. What more am I supposed to say? ❤️
Also, try to update regularly! Although I’m probably the last person who should be saying this because, yeah, even I give really late updates. But still, there are people who are genuinely connected to your book and waiting for your updates, so don’t keep them waiting for too long! ❤️
