Just want to let you in on the novel I am writing on. Here is a snippet for it:
"If you won't send him as your ambassador to my mafia clan, I promise you, all hell breaks loose and blood will fall."
Carson's jaw hung open as he stared at the raging man in disbelief. He couldn't figure out if he should be threatened or amused by the man in front of him. He could see Ezra's eyes were blazing with absolute possession and blood lust. He knew the man would be damned if he didn't get what he want. But he wanted to know just how much this man was smitten to his own brother. He needed assurance that somehow, his little feisty brother would be safe around the warlord.
"You would go that far just to get him in your territory?"
"Yes. I had staked my claim on him. If you won't surrender him and give in to my desire, I'll consider it as an act of treason. Your action would mean an all out war against the Dark Chaos mafia clan."
"There is really no need for you to do that. We will send him to you, but you know how much he loathed you. His entire core shook with rage and fury every time he sees you. Constantly meeting with each other would mean a total disaster for the both of you."
"I don't care. I want results. I helped you win the war, you got your lover back. The Dark Chaos never do any favor for anyone. We are the superiors, we are the Kings of the underground world. And never forget, no one messes with Ezra Chaos. It's payback time. It's time for me to claim what's mine."
What do you guys think? Any thoughts?
