Sophie

I'm honestly sorry, but I aim towards an audience who can relate to the reader I portray. Not everyone is the same and I hope you can realize that, so I can't meet everyone's expectations and needs because I don't know each individual reader personally. And emotions are not meant to, in my opinion, be blocked off and be labeled as weak because I find emotions beautiful. It's beautiful that we as humans can experience them so fluidly and vividly. I'm sorry if I offended you, and I hope you stop reading my book if you are offended so deeply because that is not my goal. I hope we both, as Wattpad users,  can set aside our differences and learn to accept each other for our differences in thought. I know your points and I respect them, so I suppose that we will simply have to agree to disagree or have unpleasant conflict, which I deplore of immensely. 

You do need to relise that there are so many people who can't cry nor feel emotions. In fact a large number of wattpad users have that type of depression, therefore they can get really depressed if not suicidal over something like that. She is actually a female, therefore feminists, like me. Might get really mad and frustrated over something like this, since it is in correct and a sign of weakness. 
            
            Look how I got over 300 followers, I just made the reader a emotionless badass and there I go...
            
            I'm pretty sure most readers incudeing me, would agree...

I just read through my chapter and found nothing wrong with it concerning making the reader a "crybaby". There are perfectly good reasons to cry, I'm not sure where you're getting at. Maybe Token's was a bit much, but it was mostly a joke because his name and Tolkien's sound similar. I'm sorry if I offended anybody but crying doesn't have to be a huge deal. I'm a feminist myself and I know that I can cry from levels of frustration or from simply the dog dying in the movie. Thank you for your concern but I'll keep my chapter up. I honestly value any critique I get, but I'm still proud of my chapter. And no, I don't think I'm making my character weak. Strong people can cry at simple things and just because I show one scenario of the reader crying doesn't make them a crybaby. But I am sorry if I offended you, I like my chapter but I'm sorry that you don't.