Parrot-princess
I have started a book and if you see this please read the prologue and tell me what you think. I accept all forms of criticism. Thank you.
Parrot-princess
itsdanielvoid
Hello there,
Since you're such a great reader and a person with experience of amazing stories. I'd really like to request you to please give "the one who kissed my forehead" a read and let me know if the story is beautiful or not. I welcome your suggestions, either see me on my wall or inbox.
Yours,
Daniel Void.
https://my.w.tt/NYiLlI7av6
itsdanielvoid
@itsdanielvoid Hey, Thank you very much. Glad you liked the story. It means a lot that you said it. I really wanted the readers to believe that this is a real story and live with the characters. It's not obviously the book with the most amazing vocabularies and top notch grammar but I'm definitely sure that I will make it one of the most beautiful stories you have ever come across anywhere. I am working on the next chapter, will be uploading it real soon. Please stick by because your reviews matters to me
Parrot-princess
@itsdanielvoid I love your story. It seems very personal and realistic as though this actually happened. You are a very good writer and you give just enough details that it is neither boring or a mouthful. I love how you describe everything happening in the background but yet do not let it drag you away from the main story. This is not usually the kind of book I read but it is really good and I'm looking forward to more chapters.