Hey, just started reading your book and finished the prologue and chapter 1. So far I'm loving all the different characters and their descriptions, it definitely leaves me wanting to know more about them.
So far I feel like I know more about their personalities rather than how they look so maybe that's something describe further (like maybe adding a couple more details when shes getting ready in the mirror). But I could be getting ahead of myself here and I might find that you do that later on haha.
But yeah, so far I'm enjoying it and I've not spotted many if not any, grammatical errors. A very high standard of work !
Sorry if I rambled but just thought I'd post my feedback here :) Thanks for the follow as well haha- if its still wanted I'll give you more feedback once Ive read more x
