ParticleWave

My first ever poem "What if I wasn't There??" is out now!!
          	Don't forget to vote and comment!
          	Also do share it with your family and friends becz afterall sharing is caring 
          	Do give me your suggestions about it!!
          	
          	Read it and embark on an interesting journey of finding your Innerself and the Real You
          	
          	Read it here:-
          	"What if I wasn't There??"
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/179820372-what-if-i-wasn%27t-there
          	
          	I hope you enjoy reading it!!
          	Cheers!!
          	Happy reading!!
          	
          	

sorcax

You deserve even more, your Poetries rhyme perfectly and the hardest chore is to make a sense out that rhyme (which is sometimes difficult, and to emphasize one's feelings to the reader) but you were more than close.
          Loved it<33❤️
          Keep growing.

ParticleWave

@sadxddy  Thank you, it really means a lot. ❤️
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ParticleWave

My first ever poem "What if I wasn't There??" is out now!!
          Don't forget to vote and comment!
          Also do share it with your family and friends becz afterall sharing is caring 
          Do give me your suggestions about it!!
          
          Read it and embark on an interesting journey of finding your Innerself and the Real You
          
          Read it here:-
          "What if I wasn't There??"
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/179820372-what-if-i-wasn%27t-there
          
          I hope you enjoy reading it!!
          Cheers!!
          Happy reading!!