Pashico5

I have not made any poems in years, yet I tried to make a short one based on the classic "Roses are Red" poem. I doubt it is any good, but please take a look at it in the book "Short Story Sandbox" and please give me constructive criticism. I look forward to your feedback. Stay safe!

Pashico5

I have not made any poems in years, yet I tried to make a short one based on the classic "Roses are Red" poem. I doubt it is any good, but please take a look at it in the book "Short Story Sandbox" and please give me constructive criticism. I look forward to your feedback. Stay safe!

CombineEliteRobert

whens the new chapters of your girls und panzers stories?

Pashico5

@Panzeronthelake34 I'm not sure. I want to improve my writing, but it's not easy without critical feedback. I have another thing called Short Story Sandbox where I write short stories for critical feedback, but basically nobody has read any of them. If you'd like to speed the process along, please check it out and give me criticism only. 
            
            Stay safe!
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Pashico5

Hello, dear readers! I am... sorta back. I will not update my GuP stories for the time being, but I will write whatever comes to mind in the form of short stories. These stories are meant to be criticised, so please feel free to read and butcher them. The first story is already out. 

Pashico5

I owe an explanation for turning into a ghost.
          
          The holidays are over, and it's time to get back to writing. Well, that was my original plan. After reading some well-written stories, it made me realize how miserably dull my writing is. Due to this, I shall take some time off from writing in order to improve myself so that I can deliver more exciting stories. Sorry for the long period of inactivity, and thank you for your patience.
          
          Stay safe and healthy!

Maybe_an_author

@Pashico5 Don't worry man, take as long as you need! A well written story that takes a bit longer is miles better than a rushed story that contains many mistakes. It's great to see you improving!
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Pashico5

I have decided to start a new GuP fanfic set in the same universe, and around the same time as the latest chapter in Our Own Style. These two stories will be updated together chronologically, more or less. This new fanfic will be in BC Freedom, due to the chronic lack of fanfics with that school. That, and I've always seen their situation as very interesting for a story and I've wanted to write about them for a while already. 
          
          The first chapter is going to release Soon™.