@PastelJoyCreate
dude if you don't like my story then don't read it simple as that! there's no point hating on it of ya get me? i mean its my story i write the way i want, not up to you mate. thank you for your honesty but seriously, do yourself one!---nasihah
@fashionista98 i liked some parts of the story, and thight others weren't very interesting. I think whoever wrote it isn't past 15 at the max. I don't know it wa slightly immature, but I did like the humor. But for the parts I enjoyed I would say well done.
Lol thank you for your input, however some editing is taking place so hopefully the immaturity would be removed.
Hi, can you check out Cinderhella please?
