SJHauthor

Hey !
          
          How about checking out my new story I just published? 
          A little review of what I could change or make better would definetly help me get better at writing. Only if you find time of course!
          
          Thanks in advance!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/297598538?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=SJHauthor&wp_originator=ESx%2BNGtWHxoB2zwCJGNk65Ffq8D9ytxDRRjoaJ1LlkCvcOaeOU8lGzXSV22g9jOdXZv9Dys8HNiMJbgFEtmrGASQKmmcFaja%2Bcb09cbEf2hR2W%2BA9BSaOWgFkasxkfBk