PatriciaB96

♡ read my book please ♡
          	
          	Hey guys! I need your opinions if I'm writing a trash story or a cool one, or in between I need opinions. 
          	
          	Thanks!

idk_ithink_yes

Hey! Thanks for following. I've started reading your book. Do you wanna exchange critique's? I would love to know whether or not my writing is consistent. I'm hoping to know what's good, what you think I should work on, suggestions on flow, pacing, character development maybe? Let me know!

PatriciaB96

Yeah, sure you can. Thank you
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idk_ithink_yes

@PatriciaB96 Also lmk if you'd like me to continue this way. I did the prologue for now but I can critique in the same style if you like it
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idk_ithink_yes

@PatriciaB96 lmk if the way I commented was just too spammy for your tasted xD. If you want, I can just condense my thoughts at the very end.
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