Patrick101620

Just published Part 4 for "The Wizard's Final Stand." Please comment or vote and tell me what maybe needs work or what I did that you liked. Thank you

I think part 4 of the wizard's final stand is the longest part I've ever written. combine that with moving and the outcome is an overdue part. the next part will be published on Friday or Saturday since I need my editor to look over the part. 
          
          Thank you for your patience.

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@onlya2z thx for following have fun on your day off from school

@onlya2z who are you

@onlya2z If you hate jelly beans soo much then I can poop them out, but even better they taste like Harry Potter jelly beans

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Hey Dylan

The prologue of "The Wizards Final Stand" is completed and will be released on Friday instead of Saturday. I choose this reason, because I want feedback as fast as possible and because I can't wait to release it.
          
          -Dylan M

I'm not happy with the way that the wizard's final breath turned out to be, I think I jumped the gun way too fast and didn't have enough story development in it. So what I'm going to do is to keep the story up, but use it as a skeleton and make another story with the same plot, but a lot meatier than the previous story so I might post the first chapter to the revamped wizard's final breath on Saturday. Please give some feedback so I know how I'm doing on the revamped version. Thank you for reading and I hope this story will become a big hit for my followers and the random people that read this story that might become my future followers 
          
          Sincerely,
          Dylan M.