PatrickDay7

Hey so I just posted a poem I wrote a while back for someone. Let me know what you think! 

PatrickDay7

Hello everyone! So I need a favor from all of you wonderful readers and writers out there. I could really use some feedback on my story. I need to know what I'm doing right and what I'm doing wrong. If you require the same thing, I'd be happy to read yours and give you feedback as well. Please let me know. Thank you so much!