Patrick Joshua Lingon

hello try to read this http://www.wattpad.com/story/3138831-%E2%84%B3%E2%84%B4%E1%BD%B4%C3%A7%E1%B8%A9%E2%84%B4-%E2%84%B0%C2%A1-t%E2%84%AFm%E2%84%98%E1%B6%A9%E2%84%AF%E2%95%B0%E2%98%86%E2%95%AE-ongoing
          and feel free to criticize thank you! :)

thanks sa pgFAN Lingon!!.. Btw swimming ulet fre??

Thanks sa pagFAN!!!!