Paucorum

Hope you are doing well! 
          	
          	Just wanted to let people know that it can take a bit longer until a chapter comes out, and I may be a bit slower on reading (I have internship as well as other things I need to prioritize this week.) 

Paucorum

@Paucorum Thank you : ) It's a part of my studies, and I'm looking forward to it. 
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I_Try_Writing

@Paucorum Cheers for letting us know, good luck on your internship, hope they recognise your potential and hire you permanantly (if that's what you want).
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Paucorum

Hope you are doing well! 
          
          Just wanted to let people know that it can take a bit longer until a chapter comes out, and I may be a bit slower on reading (I have internship as well as other things I need to prioritize this week.) 

Paucorum

@Paucorum Thank you : ) It's a part of my studies, and I'm looking forward to it. 
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I_Try_Writing

@Paucorum Cheers for letting us know, good luck on your internship, hope they recognise your potential and hire you permanantly (if that's what you want).
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Paucorum

Just letting you know that I'm working on the next chapter for the Wonka fanfic. It will at latest be released sometime next week. Hope you're all doing well!

lyyli_rikkunen

Yay! Looking forward to reading it!
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AquaSIAus

Hey should we support each other?♡

Paucorum

@AquaSIAus Thank you for asking ♡ 
            
            I think your story is to spicy for me though. But if you ever post another type of story, feel free to notify me :)
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Paucorum

Added a short chapter that is before the Gothenburg chapter. 
          
          It is to explain the story and the movie a little bit more. I'm also trying to make it fit into the story more, so I may make some slight edits.
          
          Is currently also thinking about adding a short chapter that explains what happens to Scruff, the dog, so if anyone wants to, feel free to let me know if that would be too much or if it would add to the story. (If not it will come later in the book what has happend.)

Paucorum

And also thank you 
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Paucorum

@Paucorum They help! So I think it could work either if I do or do not reveal it. But my conclusion is that I will keep it secret and reveal it when it's time. 
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I_Try_Writing

@Paucorum I thought she would return to where AND when she left, wake up a few minutes after passing out in Gothenburg... If time is passing in real world, not 100% sure a chapter on Scruff is needed. She wakes up or reappears in real world, finds Scruff was looked after by friendly chocolate shop owner or her uncle came to look for her. 
            If Scruff has an entire adventure, maybe?
            Not knowing is a mystery, keeps some suspense going.
            Those my thoughts, hope they help.
            Good luck.
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kanonattemptstowrite

For some reason, I can't see any of the comments you've put on the story :c. Thank you so much for all the comments though <3!

Paucorum

And thank you for your time ^^ ♡
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Paucorum

@kanonattemptstowrite My theory is that I read a version of the chapter before it updated. My internet has been laggy. If its not this then i honestly dont know.
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